Bringing my story to the class for a workshop, I wasn’t sure what to expect. When I read my story, everyone gave me very good and insightful feedback. The feedback I got wasn’t just sugar coated; the feedback was very helpful and helped to make my story so much better and stronger. Everyone’s feedback helped me build my story to be so much better. Also, reading everyone else’s stories helped me a lot to see what I could improve again. Seeing other people be told what is working and not working with their pieces made me look back at mine and see what even I could fix and see what other people that really work ed for them. Altogether, the workshop was very helpful and really helped me improve my piece.
